Class feed back

Framing a shot, including and excluding elements as apporopriate:
Includes appropriate props and features and settings, picture on the front cover looking up to the audience makes them feel powerful and creates eye contact with them making it inviting.

Using a variety of shot distances as appropriate:
Good use of a different range of shots including a close up, mid shot and long shot.

Shooting material appropriate to the task set:
No props are used, and outfits could be used more effectively to fit the genre. Pictures on the double page spread is possibly too seductive.

Selecting mise en scene, including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting:
Good lighting and setting used and a good choice of colours throughout, very feminine though if wanting to be used for males also.

Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the contcxt for presentation including croppping and resizing:
Pictures are cropped and cut out well and gives a neat presentation. Also, images are edited well in terms of colour, saturation, brightness etc.

Accurately using language and register:
Language is too short and vague, consider expanding for relevance, mainly just needs to be completed.

Appropriately integrating illustration and text:
Too many different fonts used, but text and images fit well together. More illustrations needed.

Showing understanding of conventions of layout and page design:
Simple and minimilistic layout, possibly needing to be more chaotic. Adding more text that are relative.

Showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size:
The text is varied, looks effective but need to be careful not to use too many fonts thruoghtout so that they follow through effectively.

Using ICT appropriately for the task set:
Photoshop is used effectively for the images in terms of cutting out and editing. Also for the text and background on the front cover.



Overall, after looking at the feed back from my peers, I think the overall level I recieved as a level 3, giving me a mark of roughly 41/42 out of 60.